It’s been a while and I miss the frolic,
Heights of sand dunes must have shifted,
Out of breath and smiling, that virtuous mine,
Now an unease is all that dwells the mind,
Really it’s been a while…
Heights of sand dunes must have shifted,
Out of breath and smiling, that virtuous mine,
Now an unease is all that dwells the mind,
Really it’s been a while…
Thoughts engaged the heart with a promise...
Of love and vivacious one-self sans a despise,
As warmth lingered in shivers from vexatious ice,
Since I have seen souls ripped for a pious dime,
Really it’s been a while…
Of love and vivacious one-self sans a despise,
As warmth lingered in shivers from vexatious ice,
Since I have seen souls ripped for a pious dime,
Really it’s been a while…
Have I moved so much to be moved by any fie?
Rotten virtues and morals littered riding a tide,
It’s been a while I cried for broken toys of mine,
Have I been blinded, oblivious of heart tethering crime?
Really it’s been a while…
Rotten virtues and morals littered riding a tide,
It’s been a while I cried for broken toys of mine,
Have I been blinded, oblivious of heart tethering crime?
Really it’s been a while…
Still innocence sprinkles to halt the demonizing demise,
An exception of exceptions for love says… its fine…
and I ignore the ruthless murderous sights sine die,
praying for bliss and for all to be jocund heartily sized…
Really it’s been a while!
An exception of exceptions for love says… its fine…
and I ignore the ruthless murderous sights sine die,
praying for bliss and for all to be jocund heartily sized…
Really it’s been a while!
Amit Khanna
Founder, BioInformatics Support and Analysis
www.bisa.co.in
24 comments:
welcome,
a smart poem.
living is learning,
we fall and get up,
your poem is full of emotions,
well done!
keep going.
a powerful account.
masterful delivery.
So true, it's been awhile...
true feelings,
fabulous write.
amazing poem.
very sense making.
the opening line is mind blowing.
I loved the last few lines. Your poems is full of emotional shifts.
~Sayantini Bhattacharya
A Mother's Promise
Nice poem - a rediscovery of innocence!
lovely poem. keep it up! here's my rally.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/waters-of-spring/
Words cannot express how much I enjoyed reading this poem. Stopping by from the Thursday Poetry Rally.
impressive conjectures.
incredible.
powerful talent.
a rebirth after chaotic struggles.
love to see twilight.
a complete piece with ashes and beauty clearly drawn.
creative and eloquent words.
beautiful.
heartfelt thoughts.
we become smarter after dramas and struggles.
powerful piece.
authentic and genuine words.
animated descriptions.
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