Each word is a new poem... each breath a new rhyme... Each smile a new beginning... each day a blessing sublime!

Fie...

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A screech, a cry and the scattered shards,
All but a stained view and a lifeless mass,
It had it in it a gory and to talk mumbles for all,
Stunned among ruins he was the only one tall,
It was gibberish soothing and it exploded though itself,
Tall he was but was just a speck on his crumbled pelf,
A tale of love and ginormous nothing but love,
He held on his belief and stood by his trove,
Trove of passion, serene love and faith's might,
He had it in him to offer his life that night...
He held his beloved and ignored the deception,
To tread high he imagined a height of affection,
Mercilessly slaughtered and shattered just an utter fie,
Tomb says the date but he died long ago when even alive...

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

thanks, very good =)

Elizena said...

Interesting piece! I'm reading this wrong, but it felt like someone was willing to overlook being betrayed because of such a strong love. At first I felt kind of sad for this person, then I remembered something my mom always swore by and that was that love could conquer all things. Good piece! Be blesses, :-)

http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/05/extraordinary-strength.html

Amit Khanna said...

Thanks Elizena!

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Timonthy Jacobshen Wood said...

an interesting fir tribe.

Justin Penter Wood said...

everyone has a choice,

people "love" via all types of reasons,

bless the lovers.

Jessica Theodoragoss Alspach said...

powerful.

Roessel Morton Nicholas said...

love the greenness and colorful thoughts.