This poem I wrote in 2000. When world was not at peace and the unrest had just begun.
Withered flesh and the gunpowder,
Bowed humanity and pseudo power,
Let those be considered evil,
Who stand with pride that’s uneven…
Few tears be spared with dropped smiles,
For them who got baked and couldn’t cry…
May god bless the wandering souls!
Let those be rested for humanity’s cause,
Many might have died…
But many to save...
Lets be the savior, not of material,
But of our inner self and that’s crucial,
Lets save the humanity…………
Banging bangles and virgin smiles,
Those oozing innocence and life,
Delicate movements of those hands,
Inviting, telling here hell is banned,
All jocund waves’ that heavens have,
Lets live it, just live it…
Amit
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You have a God given talent to write. Your poem is very well written with a picture painted clearly of the war. Thank you for stopping by william's public blog to read my poem. I am happy you liked it.
very very beautiful. loved the last stanza and the sound of optimism in it.
heart touching poem
what a superb poem friend, very exciting, thanks for the visit :)
a moving poem:)
just live it indeed! nice work!
lovely poem..Heartspell
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I very much admire the sentiment. let's make this world a better place:]
Well written. It's sad it's still so relevant this many years later.
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Good description...getting an image in my mind! Nice!!
This is very well written, Thank you for allowing us to read it!
beautifully portrayed sadness and a hint of hope
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