Each word is a new poem... each breath a new rhyme... Each smile a new beginning... each day a blessing sublime!

Did I?

It is a poem of desire, love and self doubt. It is an exception to the reality....

Filtering rays from the clouds above,
And a warmth for my eyes as pure love,
I hook onto the moment and smile as I say,
A tickle in my heart and the joyous sway……
An evening of solitude and an eternal bliss,
It was a lakeside and the sensuous kiss…
Fingers mingled and were driving the tide,
I knew its heaven and it just isn’t a ride….
A chirp had never been so melodious,
Feathered one never to me seemed callous,
It was all rhythm and softness for my heart all through,
Owned a trickling joy and a unknown ache all though,
I wished it lingers for a dateless time through my life,
Then I thought have I done enough to have it? Did I?

Amit

25 comments:

R, TGC said...

But it always lingers in that secret place, hidden behind all those doors of yours...

Good one Amit :-)

Jingle said...

hello,
I am not sure which week you are in,
you must comment for 18 poets to remain active for week 23....

well,
thank you for the poem.
please follow the link of Rally week 23 to comment to fulfill the requirement...

Jingle said...

liked the delightful mood in your poem...

psingh said...

very nice think

island of peace said...

it sure looks like heaven. very beautiful and dreamy.

Saumya said...

very beautiful!

buttercup600 said...

This leaves you with a dreamy feeling...what a wonderful poem :)

Short Poems said...

Lovely poem.

fiveloaf said...

love it!

Adam said...

A great scene you paint with words. thanks.

megzone said...

hey Amit..that was a lovely poem there :)
loved the flow of words
u simply conjured up the image in my mind :)
keep em coming :D

here from Jingle's Rally
you can check my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/07/01/thursday-poets-rally-footboard-traveller/

joanny said...

Enchanting romantic and thought provoking -- questioning a love so divine and do we really deserve it?

I love the way you make the words flow like a beautiful river.

Joanny

kavisionz said...

Ofcourse you did!!! A very beautiful and soothing poem...
Thank you for sharing...

Have a great July, Amit!

JamieDedes said...

Deftly painted in watercolor rhyme. Thank you! Happy Rally day.

Gerardine Baugh said...

Beautiful line:
"I wished it lingers for a dateless time through my life,"
Sweet words.
Gerardine

signed...bkm said...

we always question, and so we should....bkm

Tim Keeton said...

Very nice.

Rhyme on!

Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/05/poetry-awards-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-24/

three poetry awards,
two general awards...
enjoy!
;)

Brian Miller said...

sounds like the perfect place...and if its real you dont need to do anything to deserve it. smiles.

Amit said...

thanks guys!! @ brian its all real when you feel it from heart.

Jingle said...

your poem is represented now as promised,
Happy Wednesday!
;)

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful. Fantastic Write Up!!!!!

hoiden said...

great poem...i love this one...all feelings are beautiful expressed:)

soundoffreedom said...

the scenery the mood the emotion the words all beautiful!

Jingle said...

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