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Her eyes tell the way to live...

This poem is about love, an exception from normal life of tears and joys mixed... I want the good part and I am honest about it.

Her eyes tell the way to live, 
Her talks like gospel spread the peace, 
My heart she rented way back, 
Now in my eyes she rules, 
Oh love cast it’s spell so fast, 
I could see the magic in heart it booms, 
Let me have this in my blood, 
You might say it seduction, 
For me it’s in disguise a boon, 
Let me live this moment for long, 
In my heart she shall survive, 
So long my breath blooms,
O’ lord it might be too much to ask, 
But let me a life with only jolly task !

Amit


9 comments:

R, TGC said...

good one...so while renting were you the needy one? or, she was?

Amit said...

It was me the needy one. Thanks!

Hoiden said...

4 u:) Plz check out both links

http://hoiden.wordpress.com/awards/awards-from-jingle-july-1/

http://hoiden.wordpress.com/awards/friendship-awards/


~hoiden

Jingle said...

great piece.

Jingle said...

magical words....

Olivia said...

Interesting............

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dustus said...

The words and picture work together nicely. cheers

Priyanka's Neverland said...

she would definitely continue to survive..coz Love survives it all...

:) Keep writing!